Friday, September 27, 2019
Questions Essay Example | Topics and Well Written Essays - 250 words - 12
Questions - Essay Example In the end, the author has provided a plan of actions to overcome the problems. Moreover, the author has given some suggestions to make young people aware of the importance of nursing profession, as well as to encourage them to join this profession. Considering the nature of the second and the third essay, I feel that opening and closing were appropriate because letters and memos do not need anything in the opening and closing paragraphs other than the original motive. I do not see any issue regarding cohesive devises in the essays as all of them have been written professionally. The only issue that I have observed is regarding third essay in which ââ¬ËIââ¬â¢dââ¬â¢ could have been replaced by ââ¬ËI wouldââ¬â¢. For example, ââ¬ËDivision for six years, Iââ¬â¢d like to proposeâ⬠¦Ã¢â¬â¢ could have been replaced by ââ¬ËDivision for six years, I would like to proposeâ⬠¦Ã¢â¬â¢. Every other thing, such as, connective words, transitional sentences, and paragraphs seem to be
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